Our group evaluated Jordan, Aubrey, and Dalton's creation story presentation. Overall, I thought it was good. Whoever did the writing on it did a great job. It's very descriptive and really paints a picture in your mind of what's going on in the story, like the process of the Earth's creation by one of the gods. And they did a good job of understanding what makes a creation story, especially an entertaining one. I like that it's not too long or short, either- it's just the right length that makes it easy to read.
I think they also chose a good medium for their story. Making a slideshow is a simple way of presenting what they've got to everyone. I will say I think it's a bit plain looking, but it seems like there's space on the slides for images, so that and maybe a change of background color will solve that problem. Other than that, I can't think of much else to say about it. It's a little rough, but after they add onto it, I think it'll be a great presentation.
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